THE OLD DEARS
(Words in Retirement)
I was drifting through that neighbourhood
In visiting hours for the twilight ward
And thought I should drop in on Myriad.
Will you look at what the cat’s brought in!
She said from her pillows, newly thin.
Not that ill then, Myriad, I grinned.
Better than her, she sotto voce’d,
Nodding her flattened greasy head
At toothless Lest wheezing on the next bed,
And poor Mrs Fain died last Thursday:
She had no visitors, such a shame,
And no-one’s come to take her things away.
All those tests but they still don’t know what’s wrong;
If you ask me, they’re all charlatans.
They dump us here when we’ve lived too long.
Then came their offspring in a burly ruck,
Middle-aged and mostly out of work,
Written off as too telling or too abstract:
Unsafe Peter, worthless Tom, graceless Grace,
Joyless Joy, others I could not place,
Full of anger and self-righteousness -
Mes semblables; there but for the grace …
Better go. You’ll soon be right as rain,
I said, thinking She’ll not see home again
And singing Heigh ho defenceless old dears,
Valiant workhorses of yesteryear,
See-through skin and bare-eyed in the sere.
Better go. You’ll soon be right as rain,
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Liked this.You've got the voice of the characters in their cliched ridden mundanity and the poet's voice- does the voice of the poet sound quite distinct ? Accepting of it all ? It's implied he only called in on off chance in the first stanza.
Simon Armitage's poem, November is brutal on old age describing the nearly dead:"We are almost these monsters..."
Enjoyed reading this.
Thanks Michael. Or Larkin: the Old Fools
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