Friday, 22 April 2011

Last distraction for the day before I get down to some work: Michael's great poem about the Dorothys reminded me of one of mine which I set out below (published in the Interpreter's House a while back)

THE OLD DEARS

(Words in Retirement)

I was drifting through that neighbourhood

In visiting hours for the twilight ward

And thought I should drop in on Myriad.


Will you look at what the cat’s brought in!

She said from her pillows, newly thin.

Not that ill then, Myriad, I grinned.


Better than her, she sotto voce’d,

Nodding her flattened greasy head

At toothless Lest wheezing on the next bed,


And poor Mrs Fain died last Thursday:

She had no visitors, such a shame,

And no-one’s come to take her things away.


All those tests but they still don’t know what’s wrong;

If you ask me, they’re all charlatans.

They dump us here when we’ve lived too long.


Then came their offspring in a burly ruck,

Middle-aged and mostly out of work,

Written off as too telling or too abstract:


Unsafe Peter, worthless Tom, graceless Grace,

Joyless Joy, others I could not place,

Full of anger and self-righteousness -

Mes semblables; there but for the grace …


Better go. You’ll soon be right as rain,

I said, thinking She’ll not see home again


And singing Heigh ho defenceless old dears,

Valiant workhorses of yesteryear,

See-through skin and bare-eyed in the sere.


2 comments:

  1. Better go. You’ll soon be right as rain,

    I said, thinking She’ll not see home again

    Liked this.You've got the voice of the characters in their cliched ridden mundanity and the poet's voice- does the voice of the poet sound quite distinct ? Accepting of it all ? It's implied he only called in on off chance in the first stanza.

    Simon Armitage's poem, November is brutal on old age describing the nearly dead:"We are almost these monsters..."

    Enjoyed reading this.

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  2. Thanks Michael. Or Larkin: the Old Fools

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