GLORIA
(after “A Game of Patience” by Meredith Frampton)
I’m not unused to being special,
an only child, now the mistress here
by the terms of my father’s will.
Still your news is unusual.
Are you sure you’ve come to the right address?
Did you ask for me up at the Hall?
All around is frank fertility
all sowing of seed and bringing forth;
I’m thought too good for the local gentry.
I shelter from the August sun
Laying out patience in the Temple of the Winds
While the estate work broils on.
One might enquire, if he wants a son,
Why he doesn’t get one as a man does
Or as a god would have done –
A swan or a bull could have brought me joy;
I would have relished their rough disrespect.
Instead he sent the errand boy.
Forgive me, that’s most impolite.
I have been preferred and my hauteurs
Must seem paltry in his sight.
I will do as the master wishes
I hereby choose to be his chosen
Frozen at acceptance she loses
her girlish future and her past
dies to her
Most feel it hard
to turn cards they did not deal
but not our Lady Gloria!
[Apocryphal envoi by estate workers:
Marie-Antoinette has had her cake
No more Pomona or playing Lady Bountiful
She’ll cancel her flight to Sharm el-Sheikh.]
Clever. I like the play with rhyme and how you put mythical alluding next to a contemporary location, bringing the narrative into a present that links to myth and despots, war and tourism.
ReplyDeleteThe questions work well. "You" is invoked successfully at the beginning of the poem- a silent listener-"forgive me" seems to be the last reference to the listener. I like the movement in her mood too.
ReplyDeleteThank you both for those comments. I had intended "I will do as the master wishes" as a message to be carried back by the silent listener who has brought the news. And thereby introduce a contrast between "mistress" in the first stanza and the very different "master"; and a similar contrast, as between worldly and heavenly concerns, implicitly in the reference to "my father's will" in the first stanza and the father's will that is being followed in her last words.
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